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आमद Āmad
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टिप्पणियाँ भेजें (Atom)
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Awesome...passionate...superb!!!!!!!!
जवाब देंहटाएंAreal gud one
जवाब देंहटाएंbahut khoobsurat....
जवाब देंहटाएंwah khoobsurat rachna....badhai
जवाब देंहटाएंbhai waah ... paseene ka kya khoob istemaal kiya hai
जवाब देंहटाएंbhai wah . . . . paseene ka kya khoob intezaar kiya hai
जवाब देंहटाएंHi Bharat/Dastkar ..i loved your new poem , Amad, its such a suttle and poem,shows the love that you have for the woman of your life, she must be very fortunate to have u....plus I loved the dherav/stillness...reminds me of my days in India ..vo sardi ki narm dhoop.......i am sure u will go very very far...in poetry..may be Bharat Ratan in poetry for Bharat..too gud..plus i like your style..its a very , natural flow ..not too slow not too fast..maza atta rehe,,gungunee dhup ki tarah
जवाब देंहटाएंHi Bharat/Dastkar ..i loved your new poem , Amad, its such a suttle and poem,shows the love that you have for the woman of your life, she must be very fortunate to have u....plus I loved the dherav/stillness...reminds me of my days in India ..vo sardi ki narm dhoop.......i am sure u will go very very far...in poetry..may be Bharat Ratan in poetry for Bharat..too gud..plus i like your style..its a very , natural flow ..not too slow not too fast..maza atta rehe,,gungunee dhup ki tarah
जवाब देंहटाएं